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Your False Promise
Contributed by
Holli
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You said,
No...
You promised you weren't ever going to leave me then you hand me some stupid story and take off.
Numb and cold. I'm sorry. I wasted time...
Time that wasn't mine.
But strange thing is, I wouldn't give it back even if I could. Those moments were special but obviously not good enough for you.
Engagment lost among other things. Losing hope...
Losing blood...
Lost in you...
In the memories.
As I lay,
still loving you so very dearly, my depression speaks to me.
Goodbye to happiness, for my heart has been raped once again.
Copyright ©
Holli
... [
2006-02-27 21:52:19]
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Re: Your False Promise
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by eggflipper on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:17:38 PM AEST
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| Even stranger, you'd do it all over again just to feel that once again, no. The pain certainly uplifts the pleasure. |
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Re: Your False Promise
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:20:44 PM AEST
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nice work here, I understand exactly how you feel.
PEACE |
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Re: Your False Promise
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by Froggy on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:52:15 AM AEST
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I've had the same thing...only after being told that i would have to leave them, because they would never break up with me in their life....
Great Write.... |
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Re: Your False Promise
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by Redhotchilichic on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 10:13:52 AM AEST
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| This was really good work, well written. Good job! |
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