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Suicide
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MrPepetone
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:26:11 PM in AEST
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Take me out into the backshed
Nail me to the floorboard
Put a blanket over my dead corpse
And cry,
Waste a couple tears then dry your eyes
And soak up the blood that I gave to keep your life
Is it life, or is it a lie?
Is life livin really worth givin a life to die?
I think not but maybe itssuiside
That keeps us alive longer than many stricken with pride
You think not? I think so
But baby your so cold and my blood runs
Warmer than yours
Copyright ©
MrPepetone
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2006-02-27 21:26:11]
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Re: Suicide
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by Ineedanap on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:44:59 PM AEST
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| Intersting and great write. SHort but definitely well-said |
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Re: Suicide
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by bobb-goodjob on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:10:46 AM AEST
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a little disturbing,
but glad u express your feelings
ive experienced a suicide
in the family.it was not fun.
even with that experience, im not getting what u r trying to say.
pleez send me an explanation message.
thnx!
ps. alltogether it was an ok poem
good job,
bobb |
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Re: Suicide
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by Karlee14 on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:46:26 AM AEST
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Ah suicide, much fun. As a cutter, I find that bleeding helps. Anywho, no one cares :P. This is a well written poem. Great concept. You definately got your point across.
Love,
Karlee |
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Re: Suicide
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:04:09 AM AEST
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Nicely written with great expression. I have a hard time with the suicide part of it as that is a hard thing for me to deal with. I did like the poem overall though. I hope that your ok and this was only an artistic expression.
Michelle |
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Re: Suicide
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:30:42 PM AEST
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very real poem
liked it alot
alex |
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Re: Suicide
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:22:28 PM AEST
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nice job, short, but makes you think!
PEACE |
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