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I Must Continue
Contributed by
Amazon
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Unable to focus on a single thought
wizzing by me, stomach tied in a knot
my marks are droping, but i cant concentrate
i must get a grasp before its to late
my parents look upon me, such diappointment and dread
some times i think id be better off dead
for how can i live up to all the want me to be
i have my own dreams oh why cant they see
for they are all worried about the future and such
but for me, dealing with right now is more then enough
my phone wont stop ringing all my friends need help
and i love being there, the one to understand
but with there problems crouding my head
whos there to take my hand
to lead me threw this cold and dark world
this constantly spinng, i think i might hurl
for all the pressures comming, money, university
there supposed to make me happy, help to develope me
but it seems that im lost dont know which way to turn
no matter what i do am i destined to burn?
for no matter how hard i try
the looks of disapointment make me want to cry
for although i wont tell them, i want to please them so much
their unrealistic standards and such
but every time i fail another part of me dies
and at the rate im going there will be nuthing left inside
as much as i want to i cant just run and hide
for my friends they all need me to hear there cries
so for them i must be strong
and my lil sister to
so i shall find a way to continue on
its the only thing i can do
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Amazon
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Re: I Must Continue
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by BSteel on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:14:37 PM AEST
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hey please spell check but i can relate
not bad keep workinng at it remember it can not be forced
peace
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Re: I Must Continue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:52:14 PM AEST
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Sweetie , I understand these problems all too well. And yes, the
trials and tribulations are difficult to manage. Seems like you have
a positive outlook by the end though ... but be strong for YOU hun.
These writes of yours are wonderful. But yes, spellcheck is good,
and I'd try to capitalize where needed. Just makes it easier for
the reader, hun.
I liked this one very much. It's quite therapeutic for you.
*hugs*
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Re: I Must Continue
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by purplestary on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:04:02 PM AEST
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go on for yourself...don't worry so much about pleasing others..because when all is said and done it is going to be your life..and your bed to lie in....and most importantly..you said..."for how can i live up to all the want me to be
i have my own dreams oh why cant they see "
if i could tell every single person in the world this i would....if you have dreams stick by them...don't stray from them. go for it..and the ones that don't wanna see...you can try to make them see..and if they still don't then you disregard them....i had dreams once...and at 20 years old i've already forgotten every one..and i hurt constantly because of it..because i know that i will never be able to go for my dreams now..i let everyone and everything stand in my way...please please don't worry about pleasing them...
your writing is wonderful..you are very talented....and this particular poem deffinantly strikes my nerves and my attention...great job.
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