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Broken
Contributed by
thesinner
on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:15:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I am broken.
So forsake me, I care not for this life.
I have delved deep into my soul,
and found nothing left.
these are endless battles I have lost.
I am undone.
So deliver me of my weariness,
and end my sorry plight
my heart like a shard of glass
is shattered from within.
It is over.
and the fruitlessness of my quest
only just realized
so finish what was begun
and release me of my chains
and I'll fall to me knees in redemption.
Copyright ©
thesinner
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2006-02-27 20:15:26]
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Re: Broken
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:27:12 PM AEST
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this is a kick ass poem.its soo kool.i love dark .the dark will prevail over all muhahahahahahahaahahaha!
sorry:)
little carryed away but well done loved it |
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Re: Broken
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by eggflipper on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:43:59 PM AEST
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| Emotion always gets in the way of love. Is it really release from the chains you want? |
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Re: Broken
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by eggflipper on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:44:48 PM AEST
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| it's beautiful. Full of emotion. Sadly, I get it. |
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:49:27 PM AEST
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Yes, let go, and let God.. free ourselves from harm..
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Re: Broken
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:05:42 AM AEST
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I agree with Crazy, this is a kick ass poem. I like it.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Broken
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:12:02 AM AEST
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Incredible! This write moved me in more ways than one.
Michelle |
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