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A new poem
Contributed by
Johny
on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:34:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Inside I am crying,
Just to hear what you said,
I lay awake eyes open in my bed,
Thinking of you,
These dreams of you,
Will they come true?
From the moment I met you
Till the day I leave,
I have always loved you,
So stay with me,
“Promise me”,
Now we are old,
Come into my arms,
And well be together,
Always smile for each other.
Copyright ©
Johny
... [
2006-02-27 17:34:07]
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Re: A new poem
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:02:11 PM AEST
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| whata humble poem i love it .i feel this way over a boy aswell.i like this a lot it will go into my book of favorite poems.(it is a book that has poems that i have collected over the years )well done |
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Re: A new poem
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by dougnut on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:58:07 PM AEST
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Words from the heart
are the best placed in the correct order to make beautiful poetry. |
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Re: A new poem
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by Amazon on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:34:29 PM AEST
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i really like this the sentiment is great
only thing i might change would be the flow |
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Re: A new poem
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by lovebug on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:36:49 PM AEST
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good write do not let others tell you how to write it is your poem and is you want to change it you would have before you posted it right. keep up the good work.
your friend:
lovebug |
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Re: A new poem
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by lovebug on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:38:13 PM AEST
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sorry I misspelled some words. but I think you will get what I mean
lovebug |
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