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My Avowal
Contributed by
DieRomantic
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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So is this when im supposed to say,
You broke my heart, but its okay,
Even though I cry for you every day,
My feelings dont matter anyway?
Im sorry to say, youve made a mistake,
Im not going to allow myself to break;
I wont waste my feelings on a fake,
That is not a risk im going to take.
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DieRomantic
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2006-02-27 17:20:23]
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Re: My Avowal
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by purplestary on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:49:42 PM AEST
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| short and simple yet full of so much . great write. i can feel the emotion in this. |
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Re: My Avowal
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:53:22 PM AEST
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| isnt that the truth i here you when you say that.i thing i will tell this dide im into just what your poem say s.nice job straight to the point |
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Re: My Avowal
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:10:42 PM AEST
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i liked it, the whole topic sounds a lot like one of my (not so good but still) poems "too late"
good write
~natalya |
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Re: My Avowal
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by eggflipper on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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| You'll never know the fake until you take the risk...in the future. Only a fool continues to pan for gold in a dried river bottom. |
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Re: My Avowal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:50:41 AM AEST
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| So much said in so few words, great write.....Mike |
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