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can it ever be
Contributed by
crazy
on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:54:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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wishing you were here in my arms
to hold each other once more.
my heart is torn in two
to go with you, or not and never know what would have happened
wishing to have that sweet taste of your lips
the tender hands that held me so close
those eyes, take me in to a world of pure nothingness.
where i worry about nothing,but what will happen next with you.
trouble is all around me when you look at me.
don't know how to say no, but not really wanting to .
wish for you to just grab me and take control of my body,
being seduced by you and only you seems to be too good to be true.
never being able to tell you that i want you to bend me to your will.
fear is there, yes, but the way we are around each other
it's just right.
your love was the deepest to me
i wish it could be again.
our bond was the strongest that i have ever felt.
but, where were you when i needed you the most.
you were nowhere to be found.
i thought you would run to see me when i got out of the
mental hospital.you told me you would be there for me always.
what happened?
it broke me down to my lowest point that i've ever felt.
now i'm stronger,but i dont think i could do it again with you.
acting confident in what i do, yet, not truly at all confident.
will any ony ever understand how this feels
to be torn in two?
can i give you the letter
do i want to have the pressure
to have that bond that i don't think i'm ready for till i'm married
to have to act a certain way
will you ever grow up
stop being obsessed with childish thoughts
can it it ever be again?
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2006-02-27 16:54:26]
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Re: can it ever be
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:14:39 PM AEST
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i absolutely loved, the first half hit too close to home for comfort, but still,
really great write,
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Re: can it ever be
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:59:09 PM AEST
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| OK IM NOT COMMENTING ON MY OWN POEM ,BUT I JUST WANTED TO SAY I DID NOT EVEN THINK I WAS GOING TO PUT A POEM IN TODAY OR THAT I EVEN HAD ONE IN MY HEAD .I JUST WROTE IT ON THE COMPUTER,AND SUBMITTED IT.I REALLY HAD NO KNOWLEDGE OF THIS POEM I PRITED IT OUT FOR MY BOOK .YOU ALL ARE MORE THEN WELCOME TO PRINT OUT ANY OF MY POEMS.
AND COMMENTS ARE GREATLY APPRECIATED. THATNK YOU HUGS |
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Re: can it ever be
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 01:34:05 AM AEST
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| i agree w/ dirtylilsecret, this did hit home, but it was amazing all the same, Great job |
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