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You Never Looked Back
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:38:30 PM in AEST
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You never looked back the day you left,
You took with you my very last breath,
Sadness picked up where you left off,
Breeding inside like a cancerous cough.
You never looked back on my bleeding heart,
That day that you went my world fell apart,
Loneliness curling around my insides,
You did not witness the tears that I cried.
You never looked back when you ripped me in two,
You painted my life a deep shade of blue,
Years of lies lay with me at night,
Holding my throat and holding it tight.
You never looked back at my shattered world,
You can’t see the damage you did to your girl,
Broken promises swim around in her head,
Rushing inside her the lies that you fed.
You never looked back you heartless bastard,
You never even said it was good while it lasted,
That day you left my universe in tatters,
At least I now know how less I did matter.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2006-02-27 16:38:30]
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:41:26 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Willofree on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:36:36 PM AEST
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A powerful poem of love and betrayed love. Good wording that creates some vivid imagery. I don't know if this is true or not....if it is then your loss, although painful, may leave you better off.
Well done, pixie, it's good to see you posting again (at least I haven't been noticing any other writes lately) Sorry if I have just been missing them.
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:33:01 PM AEST
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Awww Pixie...I am so glad to see another poem by you. I haven't been here much of late..so I may have missed some..but I will catch up soon. This is a really powerful write..so sad and so touching. I hope all is well with you....Miss chatting with you..
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:06:46 PM AEST
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Hugs to you Krisse.
I feel that multitude of emotions that leap from this piece.
I wish you nothing less than the best!!! |
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:37:34 AM AEST
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Your poetry is so good and each poem you write has such a powerful story
well done Pixie
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:55:02 AM AEST
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| It's great to read your work again, especially one as powerful as this. I wish you all the luck in the world and look forward to reading more.....Mike |
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:33:25 AM AEST
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The emotions within this piece are felt well here. You captured your own tornment with a netting of properly fusing words. An overall gut wrecthing write! Emotionally charged!
I hope all is well. Good job as always!
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Re: You Never Looked Back
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 12:21:19 PM AEST
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OMg where have you been ?
lol welcome back pixie girl
and your write is as always emotional and deep .great job.I am here for you.
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