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~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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…Two Silhouetted Lovers…
Nestled amidst the deep night sky
The shiny stars twinkle so bright
An evening breeze gently blows
Underneath the silvery moon light
I dream of two silhouetted lovers
As they waltz around together
Dancing amidst the starry night
On a carousel of love forever
I’ve dreamt this sweet dream before
Of these two lovers and their dance
A forgotten memory or so it seems
Of a beautiful enchanting romance
The music soft ,the mood is set
Of a love so perfect and true
They look into each others eyes
And dance the whole night thru
Like a candle in the wind
The silhouetted lovers fade
They return to me at night
Up where dreams are made…
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by moses on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:31:06 PM AEST
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Hey! Well written,
The music soft ,the mood is set
Of a love so perfect and true
They look into each others eyes
And dance the whole night thru
Love that Stanza...love is such a strong emotion, and continually inspires probably the majority of all poems in some way.
Great Job!
Keep it up,
moses |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by purplestary on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:40:20 PM AEST
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| this was a beautiful and very well written poem. i loved it. thank you. |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:46:00 PM AEST
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ohhhhh this is so flowing and dreamy a delight my friend.
I give this 100 stars!
Hugssssss
Michelle |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:14:34 PM AEST
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| beautifully written , a joy to read. |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:21:41 PM AEST
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A beautifully written piece, Susie Q. Such soft and resplendent imagery,
it makes the heart feel quite light. And Susie, there is much out there
for you, my sweet girl. Your heart is too full not to be swept away ...
A lovely, lovely flowing piece by a sweet and kind heart.
love and hugs
~Breezy |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:59:28 AM AEST
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| Wow, what a warm passionate poem. The flow is so perfect and the imagery is touching to my heart. Beautiful, just beautiful.....Mike |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:44:46 PM AEST
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Sweet Sue From Across the Blue,
You are always sooooo poetic. A beautiful dream; a beautiful poem.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:25:35 PM AEST
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Oh SusieQ... this is such a beautiful dreamy write.. I can just see them dancing, so lovely, loving each other, and I pray each day and night that one lover will fade, and you will appear in that dream where He is waiting for you to have that waltz.
My friend, sweet SusieQ,
Your dream, it shall come true
~Love ~Raquey Raccoon~
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:09:28 PM AEST
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Dreams are where all pleasures lie-
(that last stanza.. oh my!!)
So moving..I love it Sue-
It's beautiful.
B |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:36:07 AM AEST
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Outstanding! Among the best of your writes which I have read. I was cradles by each line and carried into dreams as well. The ending was very poetic, precise, and seering with excellence. A terrific job!
BRAVO!
- SCM |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:26:41 PM AEST
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This is a great beautiful poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:26:57 PM AEST
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What a treasure this is. A poetic peice of magic penned by a true artist in every scence of the word. Absolutely lovely 2 read and 2 simple behold upon the page.
(((((((((Sue))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:02:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful, beautiful work.
J |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 04:58:14 PM AEST
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This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever had the privilege of reading........and I know the poetress behind it puts on paper the way she herself is..........how delightful, exquisite delight!!!!
Warm love
consuemom |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:02:05 PM AEST
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I've tried twice now to comment on your poem. For some reason it just won't work.
This is one of the most beautiful writes I've ever read.
Exquisite Delight!
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 10:52:15 PM AEST
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I think I read this before, but for some reason
never left a comment, but I guess better late
than never. For starters great poem! I really
liked the imagery and just the entire mood of
this work of art. I hope to see some more
soon.
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:59:12 PM AEST
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Sue,
I love this, it took me away... Lovely, and romantic
Hugs LG |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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| I like the style of this. It reminds me of a shadow box only different . . . I think you show an emotive and exotic view of love here. This is very good. |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 04:59:13 AM AEST
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| Wonderful absolutely wonderful. you captured the imagination beautiffully, you are a star Sue the roo A magnificent sta,,, now come bloody talk to me or I'll kick you to kingdom come (smiles) |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:43:23 PM AEST
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This muse almost leaves me wondering if it's not, rather, some enchanting dance beneath a moonlight night, filled with fireflies, fairies, and angels of delight.
A stunning and rhythmical muse of a masterful delight to the scenes. Bravo, ~*Suzie Q*~
Refreshing *hugs*, Lilly-Quill~ |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 02:47:14 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull, romantic write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~*Two Silhouetted Lovers*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 07:03:11 PM AEST
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beautiful!
i often have dreams like this....only they dont sound this beautiful when i think to describe them...dreaming and wishing of that one special person...
very nice job! it sounds like it could be a song! |
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