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Daisy
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 01:57:36 PM in AEST
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Amongst the heather on the hill
A single daisy grows
Standing proud and tall
As the gentle wind blows
Neither rain nor night
Effects its radiance
Joining with the heather
It enjoys life’s dance
It matters not the difference
In color, scent or shape
This little daisy reigns
Over the hills landscape
For she knows her spirit
Is one of love and light
That my friend is why
She shines so ever bright
The heather would have
Her always in their midst
For her strength and brilliance
Is very hard to resist
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NoSaint
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Re: Daisy
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 02:21:21 PM AEST
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this is lovely Shari and sends a wonderful message to apply to daiuly living.
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Daisy
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by thesinner on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 02:26:30 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this one. i was born in lived in scotland and i can see these images there. It makes me think of the hills covered in purple heather. Thank you. |
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Re: Daisy
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by BSteel on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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i really liked your poem but i think it could be better with revision on the second stanza
but anyways it did provide that inpirational
aprak always much needed |
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Re: Daisy
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:23:26 PM AEST
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~*Shari*~
A heavenly beautiful write that lifts one spirits. I love visting ur pages ~*Shari*~I'm always left wearing a smile. Your work is so inspiring. Keep penning my dear friend. Shine on.
*love n hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Daisy
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:28:40 PM AEST
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| nicely done, a joy to read |
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Re: Daisy
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by DieRomantic on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:20:26 PM AEST
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| A very unique subject, which I think is what I love about it. Very artistic, optimistic, and lovely. =] |
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Re: Daisy
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by dougnut on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:37:09 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this poem
enjoyed reading it
I found it inspirational . I love poetry about our creators gift to us all nature.
well written
Dougnut. |
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Re: Daisy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:04:45 AM AEST
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| Great write my friend. Flowers are all so fragile, yet so strong, as we all can be.....Mike |
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Re: Daisy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:46:32 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful adorable. Such passion you have for a single flower full of spirit and the heather warms her in the light... one strong pretty flower... even the wind brushes love on her lightly..
raquelleah |
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