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I Would Love You
Contributed by
juliette
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:43:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I knew, anything about love,
I would love you;
For the man you are,
Is surely more than I deserve.
I would be grateful for
every breathless kiss,
but I am not set up for this,
Pulling far away, walls erect-
This is what I learned.
If you had only come along
when I still believed in fairy tales,
Before happily ever after
violently blew up in my face.
Had I looked into your eyes
A second before color left my life
And I realized falling was a chance
I could not afford to take.
If memories could somehow be erased,
And heartaches really faded with time-
If this pain would let me let you in,
If I was ready to live again-
I would make you mine.
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juliette
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2006-02-27 00:43:25]
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Re: I Would Love You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 01:18:25 AM AEST
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I understand you exactly,the want but your heart is somehow shut,yes yes i do,in fact,it brung things back to me that almost i shed a tear,but i loved the way you express yourself.so keep it up.
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Re: I Would Love You
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:15:53 AM AEST
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| I know this feeling all to well. Great write. |
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Re: I Would Love You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:54:27 AM AEST
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| Great write my dear. But you don't want to pass up on something you maybe should have had long ago. The fear of being hurt can push away someone we really need. On the other hand truer words were never said....Mike....Welcome back!!!!! |
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Re: I Would Love You
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 10:25:11 PM AEST
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This is truly, a story of poets.
We all have this impediment juliette-
a curse upon us.. to counter our gift.
Your poem is terrific and bold.. yes.
B |
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Re: I Would Love You
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 11:58:11 PM AEST
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Oh, I like this piece. And I have to agree with Billy.... 'tis often a poet's curse to feel the pain a bit more entirely than others do. It can and does move us to build those walls. The lovely thing is... we so entirely celebrate their falling as well, when the time is right. Trust your instincts, Juliette --- a poet's heart doesn't just whisper when it's ready... it wails. You'll know when it's time.
Finding much here that I could relate to,
~Snemmy
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