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Ghost In The Wreckage
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:06:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It's cold and I am all alone
and I wonder
what I should do,
love is a nightmare
that haunts and makes me shudder
raising memories
of a twisted lover
who left me wrecked and ruined.
I don't try to talk
cause I know
no one listens anyway,
I'd like to deny
but I just can not lie
all I feel is damaged and pain.
I wanna
I wanna try to do something
I wanna
I wanna try to do something
but I'm in to much pain...
in the shadows
all alone
silently I am wanting,
I moan
watching the reflection of my image cracking
no need for words
when they mean nothing,
this is my wreckage
can you see my ghost
as I melt
and oh so painfully fade away.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-02-27 00:06:14]
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Re: Ghost In The Wreckage
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:32:38 AM AEST
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oooh, i loved the whole vividness of this poem, the whole ghost concept... realy beautiful write.
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Re: Ghost In The Wreckage
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by givingin on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:46:04 AM AEST
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Good write secret.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Ghost In The Wreckage
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:35:42 AM AEST
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The tittle caught me and the poem kept me reading. like the simplicity of your style.
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