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Can't You See
Contributed by
DieRomantic
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 10:10:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can no longer keep inside
These feelings ive been trying to hide
This increasing pain piercing my heart
Cant you see im falling apart?
Its you that I once deeply adored
But I dont want to love you anymore
You throw away feelings like its an art
Cant you see youve broken my heart?
All of our memories fade
Broken are all of the promises made
Every night I lay here crying
Cant you see i'm slowly dying?
Countless hours wondering where you were
To find out that youre once again with her
I get so sick of your denying
Cant you see I know youre lying?
Im afraid if I keep stalling
Back in love id be falling
I will for the last time walk out your door
Cant you see you cant do this anymore?
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DieRomantic
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2006-02-26 22:10:30]
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Re: Can't You See
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:19:59 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write on love .. thanks for sharing great work
JENNI |
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Re: Can't You See
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:57:30 AM AEST
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| wonderfulpiece of writing. Letting go is hard but well worth it to let your spirit fly free....Mike |
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Re: Can't You See
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:44:10 AM AEST
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With your thrilling words you show
Such a feeling for the flow
You make words and letters dance
To the rhythm of romance
Thanks for your kind comment on my poetry.
Hugs,
Hur |
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