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Un_Titled.
Contributed by
johndoe
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 09:46:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i'll referr to you as untitled, and hopefully to forever be unknown
i'll burry you beneath my shame,
silently whispering your forever to be "unknown" name.
i'll sit on my porch, and watch you stroll by
biting my tongue as you catch the fear in my eyes.
pretend im deaf when you whisper my name
play the card ignorance, as you continue your seductive games.
Copyright ©
johndoe
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2006-02-26 21:46:35]
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Re: Un_Titled.
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 09:48:05 PM AEST
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huh, very interesting.
can't wait to read part two.
~natalya |
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Re: Un_Titled.
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 10:13:38 PM AEST
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| i must say, untitled poems tick me off pretty badly because the author just is so inept at creating a title most the time, but its nice to come across one that actually had a purpose. excellent concept, perhaps a few people can learn from you instead of producing the same cliches. |
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