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Dark Prince
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Amazon
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 09:40:43 PM in AEST
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Prince of Darkness come to me
come reveal my destiny
give to me the ultimate kiss
suspend me between life and death
for they wont know that I am gone
and every night drawn to your song
I have seen you in my dreams
for as long as I can remember or so it seems
so please change me to one of your kind
for in your world, peace I shall find
for it is my dream to join you in the night
to be with you and join in the fight
so give to me a timeless love
that will rival the moon above
and teach me my prince, how to hunt and fly
to come and rule each endless night
teach me how to draw them out
and muffle their each and every shout
for it is my dream to live this way
so change me now and let me stay
for the night, moon and stars call to me
and to be with you I want to you see
for in this life I am forced inside
the sleep the night away
but it’s really from the day I hide
and am forced to live in misery
So my Dark Prince come for me
come for me and set me free
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Re: Dark Prince
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 09:46:41 PM AEST
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ooh.....dark prince... very interesting concept. i loved the poem, great imagery and the writing overall.
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Re: Dark Prince
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by OzChick on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 09:51:54 PM AEST
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You're writing about vampires right? Nice imagery, good rhythm and rhyme scheme. I like it.
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Re: Dark Prince
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by fake_emptyness on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:39:00 PM AEST
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i like how you play on the imagegry and sounds....well at least for me it did.. very good write.!
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Re: Dark Prince
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by secretwind on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:18:13 AM AEST
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| good flow.... |
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Re: Dark Prince
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:45:44 AM AEST
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| nice very nice |
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Re: Dark Prince
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 01:32:14 AM AEST
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Loved it.Very good.I saw evything in my mind,like a little world all in your head.Wouldn't i want my dark prince too.I understood everything perfectly.keep it up.
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