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Seeming?
Contributed by
Bsteel
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 06:59:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Echoes of a past life pass through me,
Through life like a sharpened knife,
Spirits lying in the cold dusty night,
Miracles of want, hope, and despair,
in the air just out of sight,
Politics blurred, dreams thwarted, love skewed,
Like a walk in the woods, I must walk anew,
Felicity at it's finest like an uncut diamond,
Daydreams block out the sun but still see the shining,
Passion blinded, on a course that bring no inner peace,
Reckless I look for answers not meaning,
Too much on earth to steal that loving feeling,
And so it is that only fear has me kneeling,
Echoes of a past life burn wounds,
that only heaven can bring healing,
Or so it is seeming?
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Bsteel
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2006-02-26 18:59:04]
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Re: Seeming?
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:30:35 PM AEST
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the imagery is so vivid, you use an infinite amount of metaphors in here. makes it a rather beautiful, though dark, poem.
really great write |
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Re: Seeming?
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by Amazon on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:35:29 PM AEST
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the messages that are between the lines of this poem are so strong, the emotions almost overpowering
its great |
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