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The Sinner
Contributed by
thesinner
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 06:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am the sinner
My sins, too many to remember
My innocence , lost, so many lives ago
Enslaved by my bitterness
I keep no record of my wrongs
Swallowed up by my passions
My physical needs overshadow my heart
And I have a hunger,
I hunger for what I cannot have
a love, that will never be mine
for who would love one such as I?
i am the lost one.
My conscience breathing heavily in my ears
I turn away.
Righteousness be damned
and honour trodden underfoot.
I am divided in my loyalties,
A traitor to myself.
For I have walked away fro faith
and embraced the darkness.
i reap the harvest of my sins
and clutch them tightly to my breast
I savour the sweetness of my conquests
and remain alone on my Path.
I am the sinner.
and for a moment I glimpse on what could have been
I realize it is lost to me,
and I ignore the voice of reason.
I continue on my journey
and I yield nothing, let emptiness fill me
I welcome the pain as my companion
and i grow numb to all else
I am the sinner.
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Re: The Sinner
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 06:56:30 PM AEST
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wow, really gorgeous write, beautiful, yet dark.
great flow of words, i loved it
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Re: The Sinner
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:38:12 AM AEST
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| great work! your lines just tumble one after the other - no breathing room - you're fully emersed... |
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Re: The Sinner
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:50:21 AM AEST
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awesome poem, i loved the flow to this.
I hunger for what I cannot have
a love, that will never be mine
for who would love one such as I?-- these are my favorite lines. i can truly understand you here. a really great poem! A++++
and welcome to Y.P.D.C i cant wait to read more of your writes! |
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Re: The Sinner
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by eggflipper on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:51:08 PM AEST
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| I am out of breath. |
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Re: The Sinner
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:43:48 PM AEST
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Lovely poem.
We are so blessed that the Lord keeps no records either.. peace be with you always.. keep on that beautiful journey..
raquel Leah |
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Re: The Sinner
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by mickie on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:04:21 PM AEST
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you got in going on!
you really are the sinner!
lol
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Re: The Sinner
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by Gigi_15 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 11:33:47 PM AEST
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| Deep, amazing poem, great write, love the way it rhymes, love the way you put ur feelings into words. I love the way the poem flows..it's also dark, but beautiful in it;'s own way. |
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