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Dying for perfection
Contributed by
-why_not_let_me_live-
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:09:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No wonder i cant stop crying, My lifes a living hell,
I just want to die, get away from it all,
Away from this world, so cruel and unforgiving,
lying in bed, as i write poems shivering,
All my old mates, call to see if im ok,
But they dont understand, how im feeling today,
There lives are so perfect, why cant mine be to,
Thats all i want perfection, its so far overdue,
This hospitals so boring, everythings so white,
I hate being forcefed, through a tube everynight,
The looks on the faces, of my parents and friends,
They know that im dying, but they still pretend,
That everythings ok, when they know that its not,
just let me go already, its what i need, what i want.
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Re: Dying for perfection
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by happybunnyfan on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:37:55 PM AEST
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| Great write, so in depth, you could paint a picture with your words. Hope you keep writting like this. |
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Re: Dying for perfection
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 04:57:47 PM AEST
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great write, really deep, i hope it's not true though....
~natalya |
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Re: Dying for perfection
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:41:34 AM AEST
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if u like dis poem y nit check out the other 2 ive got on this site daddys lil girl and this cruel world and beyond thanx 4 the comment s i really appriciate them they help me become a better poet and keep writing
thanx again all mi love |
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