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Broken
Contributed by
bluesbaby811
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Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 07:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All the things you did to me
All the hurt you gave
All the sides of you I saw
I''ll take into my grave
All the times you hurt me
All the things in me you stole
Ill never be the same again
Because you broke my soul
Everytime you hit me
You also hit my soul
Now theres a saddness inside me
That I cannot console
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2006-02-25 19:04:32]
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Re: Broken
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by hearts4pain on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 07:06:29 PM AEST
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nice write.
you explained it perfectly
its just flat out wrong.
people dont understand when they abuse you, its not just hurting you physically but also emotionally.
its a sad thing |
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Re: Broken
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by crazy on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 07:50:18 PM AEST
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| this is such a deeep poem .i have had friends that have been in extremly abusive familys.its so hard.they would come to school crying .all i could do is hold them.im sorry for you.that you have to be put through that.there is hope always hope.many hugs and kisses-crazy- |
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Re: Broken
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by desire on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:21:21 AM AEST
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| like the old saying goes..what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger...powerful write...i really enjoyed it....you will get pass this |
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