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You wonder
Contributed by
vivreamoureuxmourir
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Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 05:07:48 PM in AEST
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You wonder if he's telling you the truth
You wonder if his plan is real
You wonder if it could work out in the end
You wonder if this is how you should feel
You wonder if what they said was true
You wonder if you were simply played
You wonder if he ever really loved you
You wonder if he just wanted to get laid
You wonder what he's thinking
You wonder if it will even happen
You wonder why you can't let go
You wonder why you're already plannin'
You wonder why this is everything you want
You wonder why you can't just move on
You wonder if it will be the same this time
You wonder if the his love is gone
You wonder why you trust everything he says.
You wonder how you could feel any fonder,
You wonder why you don't always trust him,
You wonder why you will always wonder.
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Re: You wonder
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by rockstarr12747 on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 06:04:58 PM AEST
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heyy this is a really good poem i seem to be able to relate this poem has put alot of things in perspective for me thanx
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Re: You wonder
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by hearts4pain on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 07:13:02 PM AEST
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well done.
truth is..i dont really think there is an answer to any of those questions...
except people r blinded by their infatuations! |
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Re: You wonder
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by Unbreakable on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:25:13 PM AEST
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Good write. I like the way you ended the poem, sort of like you brought it back to the beginning. My only critisism is that you can't rhyme happen with plannin'. Overall good write though, keep it up.
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Re: You wonder
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by desire on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:14:29 AM AEST
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| well written and a very god write |
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Re: You wonder
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by VivreAmoureuxMourir on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 04:47:29 PM AEST
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| Lol, yeah, I knew that Happen and Plannin just wasn't gonna work. But thanks :P |
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