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Memories(Grave)
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:55:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Her body was weakened
By the weight of his words
And their love was close to crumbling
In the dawn of surrender
I remember when we used to love
Our seductions even and smooth
Hands running lengths
across the momentary embodiment of lust
But now, The memories fall
like soldiers on a battlefield
Lonely and forgotten
Only concrete and dirt to fill the pages
of an unwritten biography
She once loved him
But now she moves on
Because it just hurts to remember
Hurts to know, to recognize
That it was her who buried the memories
In a grave with no remorse...
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2006-02-25 14:55:10]
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Re: Memories(Grave)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 03:08:06 PM AEST
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| You wrote this poem so beautiful. Yes, it was sad, so sad... I loved the ending of this poem.. Yes, so sad and delicate.. your poem moved very smoothly. I read it with care... I loved it from the first word on. This is in my mind a masterpiece poem.. a heart written treasure. raquelLeah |
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Re: Memories(Grave)
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by VivreAmoureuxMourir on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 05:09:48 PM AEST
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I... I'm speechless.
This is the most beautiful poem I've seen on this site yet.
Too farmiliar for words to describe. |
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