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Love through steel
Contributed by
Bsteel
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Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:46:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I want to hustle for your love,
I'm no scrub, I'm no punk,
I want to hustle for your love,
I don't mean to rush
such is such,
I want to be there in the clutch,
I want to hustle for your love,
I'm crowded and I'm crushed,
I'm broke and I'm flushed,
Labled and stuck, still I try so much,
I want to hustle for your love,
I know a day will come,
Where sins will be atoned,
for heaven is my home,
till then I gotta keep going,
from among the posers, I was chosen,
and I'm still moving roses,
just under the noses,
of all that oppose this,
still I know what my role is,
as I make power moves,
grinding in my dreams,
moving at rapid speed,
it all seems a dream,
till reality brings me to my knees,
till that day comes,
I want hustle for your love.
Copyright ©
Bsteel
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2006-02-25 09:46:45]
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Re: Love through steel
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:48:53 AM AEST
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Re: Love through steel
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:17:06 AM AEST
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Great job! Way too modern in the wording for my taste, I fear. Still I have a sincere admiration in your flow and your total work here.
Good Job!
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Re: Love through steel
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by crazy on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:24:17 PM AEST
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i love this style i dont really know how to write like this but its so well put together.the way it all fits together is amazing.
well done
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Re: Love through steel
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 04:16:11 PM AEST
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a different style but I liked it.
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Re: Love through steel
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:33:21 AM AEST
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interesting style good write
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Re: Love through steel
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by Broken-Suicide on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:52:34 AM AEST
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I'm crowded and I'm crushed,
I'm broke and I'm flushed,
Labled and stuck, still I try so much,
for heaven is my home,
till then I gotta keep going,
Absoulutly true. So far ive noticed your want to give in to it but knowing you gotta keep survivng.
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