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Daddys little Girl
Contributed by
-why_not_let_me_live-
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Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 06:20:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Daddys home,
Im scared to bits,
He slames the door,
Hes having a fit,
I hear his footsteps getting closer,
Im shaking now with bruises all over,
He opens my door,
Its plain to see,
I know whats coming,
How could he do this to me,
I here mummy in the background, urging him to stop,
"Thats enough Brian im calling the cops"
But daddy just laughs, hes heard it all before,
mums in tears, as im pushed to the floor,
Why wont he stop, This isnt a life,
Hurting those closest to him,
His child, His wife,
We need help, i cant go on,
Living in fear, is tottaly Wrong,
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Re: Daddys little Girl
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:46:45 AM AEST
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| A very strong write, I feel the fear and pain in this piece.( I truly hope it is fiction) |
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Re: Daddys little Girl
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:18:25 AM AEST
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| thank you jackie for the comment and although i did rite this in fiction, the world needs 2 accnolage that this is realli happening this poem is very dear to me and i hope it opens some peoples eyes to the wrongs of domestic and child abuse, it is and important issue that has been forgotten by the world due 2 the fears of terroism etc but is still important and needs 2 b fixed can u imagine living like this living in fear |
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Re: Daddys little Girl
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by aegurly on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 11:33:55 PM AEST
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| great and powerful write keep it up!!!!! |
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