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This Is...
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:13:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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This is my game
This is how I deal
This is my shame
This is exactly how I feel
I have no idea
How else to express
I have no clue
How to supress
All these feelings
No exception of hate
My minds always reeling
That is my own fate
Fearing having time
To sit back and think
Not knowing why
I'm the only problem
Wanting to please and comply
***** it up everytime
Just to get yelled at
I'm such a spoiled brat
It makes some sense
From the angle I'm at
I'm not so incredible
I'm not so amazing
My heart walls are penetrable
So you set your guns blazing
You saw the tears in my eyes
No sympathy still
It seemed rather heartless
"Fire at will"
I took it all in
Let you break me down
Looked at all my sins
As my blood and tears hit the ground
I thought it over
In my head
Attempting to let it go
Release the words you said
This is my game
This is how I deal
This is my shame
This is exactly how I feel
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2006-02-25 00:13:09]
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Re: This Is...
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by eggflipper on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:23:37 AM AEST
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| Ìf anything, a poem should be honest. Emotions don`t lie, people descibing them do. It`s honest, its raw, it is exactly how it should be. |
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Re: This Is...
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:35:54 AM AEST
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I agree with eggflipper up there, honest, and that's what makes it as great as it really is.
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