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a gentle kiss
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 08:26:35 PM in AEST
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the light slowly wakes in my garden of surrender
colours float so serein unmasked buy it slender
sounds of water in the far but so close so near
singing her brook song erasing all fear
the smell of spring so fresh and clean
that lulls you into a loving dream
a gentle breeze a wisp of summer calm
nowing everything is right and nothing can go wrong
this dream this beauty this starless sky
making life simple not use to die
only love i miss in the surreal bliss
but thats fate love and gentle kiss
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Re: a gentle kiss
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 09:33:40 PM AEST
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| A little more gentler than your usual writes. I love it. Well done, Peace my friend. Laura |
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Re: a gentle kiss
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by funnyface on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 09:34:10 PM AEST
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I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR POEM GREAT PENMANSHIP KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
YOUR FRIEND: FUNNYFACE |
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Re: a gentle kiss
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by eggflipper on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 11:22:49 PM AEST
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| very warm. this is a nice poem and very easy to read. Very feminite. |
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Re: a gentle kiss
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 06:36:03 PM AEST
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very lovely, soft and gentle.. a poem I could read over and over.. very meditative piece..
raquelLeah |
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Re: a gentle kiss
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by crazy on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 08:59:50 PM AEST
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| kool poem i like it lots |
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Re: a gentle kiss
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 02:11:50 PM AEST
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I agree with Laura. Much softer write from you. I like the diversity.
This is like a sweet and loving caress carried on a breeze
as gentle as a sigh. Beautiful work. The imagery is stunning.
~Breezy |
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