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Olive Oil
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 08:03:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Confide in me your deepest troubles
So that I may unleash your woes from your very being
So that your flesh regains its warmth
Trust me with your most valuable prize
Open up to me and show me your insides
When you’re done, hum, a sad goodbye
Love me in lovely ways with better days
So that we can grow together in a life of certain love
A youthful maze
Embrace me with open arms and closed eyes
Look to me for answers
For anything I can provide, I will
Teach me how to best adore you
When to assert myself or when to ignore you
With loud words in slippery olive oil
Excuse me for my incompetence
I lack the stuff great things are created from
Help refill a parted heart
Come to me now if you come at all
Rest your fall on sheets
Breasts on my chest sweat meets at the center
Allow me to escort you to forbidden emotions
Explicit warnings on labels
One foot up on the kitchen glass table
Posses me while taking me in to your realm
Incorporate me into your hell
Make me apart of your thirst to rebel
Damn me if your curse is meant to cure
A token of my gratitude
A multitude of potential possibilities procured
Remember me as a false hope of greatness
A false glimmer of braveness
A washed away rainbow of colorless arches
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2006-02-24 20:03:09]
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Re: Olive Oil
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:39:12 AM AEST
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wow, really amazing poem. the descriptions, expression, it's all so vivid. i loved it.
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Re: Olive Oil
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:39:39 AM AEST
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Your longing for either, promiscuity and or final love, is very evident..
I will not make some trivial attempt to quote you-
stanzas speak for themselves..
5th is best
Wow-
Truly..
Billy
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