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ALL IN YOUR HEAD
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:46:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the insanity is killing me
though I do look fine
you look at me as a happy girl
as I sit here and sighlently die
I no longer believe in miracles
you never helped me out
you never answered my sighlent prayers
even if I would scream and shout
invisable pins are piercing me
as I watch T.V.
Im being stalked by shadows
that you cannot see
I know I should be happy
at least thats what you said
but Im being killed by images
that I know are all in my head.
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Re: ALL IN YOUR HEAD
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by funnyface on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:03:01 PM AEST
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YOUR POEM SEEMS SO INTENSE I WOULD LIKE TO TELL YOU THAT THERE IS SOMEONE WHO CARES FOR YOU ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS CALL ON HIM AND HE WILL HEAR YOUR PRAYES YOU DON'T HAVE TO SHOUT OR SCREAM JUST TALK TO HIM AND ASK HIM INTO YOUR HEART HOPE YOU FIND MY JESUS SOON HE WILL BECOME YOUR VERY BEST FRIEND IF YOU WILL LET HIM I KNOW HE IS MINE !!!
JUST CONCERNED FOR YOU
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Re: ALL IN YOUR HEAD
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:41:51 AM AEST
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it is an intense poem, and i guess that's one of the things i loved so much about it. You let it all out, and maybe one day you'll find what it is you're looking for.
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