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indivuality
Contributed by
detourchick
on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:15:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Individuality
I’m am in your hands
My life, my word now all revolves round you
You have taken control
You have forced me to change
You are pulsating in my body
You control my actions
I am just a blade of grass
In the field that you are to mow
I feel that my individuality drips from me
Like the rain from the heavens
I reach for my thoughts
That are now in a puddle
But with each passing drop
I still think of you…
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2006-02-24 19:15:08]
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Re: indivuality
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:20:00 PM AEST
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wow this is a wonderful write
beautifully writen and exicuted
the puddle and blade of grass
great imagery
peach |
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Re: indivuality
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 08:11:13 AM AEST
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| yes i agree with peach great write, i loved it |
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Re: indivuality
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 07:29:28 AM AEST
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i found this sadly beautiful...sad in that you shouldnt compromise your self for anyone! your words though, so lovely...
love n' hugs nessa |
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