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Forsaken Angel
Contributed by
Faust
on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 06:13:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My guarding seraph is still lost.
Protecting me at all cost.
He carries my sorrows inside.
Everything he will hide.
He moves foes from my life
removing reasons for my strife.
I'm called a freak for who I am
but he stops them with a pale hand.
Without any of my fears,
no more shedding futile tears.
I got rid of my hate
to finally see my fate.
But he can't bring her back
nor the bodies in the sack.
My hearts sinking but no one sees
since my angel covers their eyes.
Someone please just help me out.
No one hears me scream or shout.
I thought my life couldn't be worse
but this forsaken angel is a curse.
Copyright ©
Faust
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2006-02-24 18:13:39]
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Re: Forsaken Angel
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:05:42 PM AEST
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very deep loved this write...
tasha |
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Re: Forsaken Angel
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:17:52 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Forsaken Angel
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by Lenore_Poe15 on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:31:39 PM AEST
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| yes well done Tanuki I love it |
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Re: Forsaken Angel
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:05:37 PM AEST
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Faust~
Your poem generates much sadness and pain. Like one has lost someone or something that means alot to them and they are unable to let go~ You are very talented and you possess such a flare with a pen. Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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