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Sitting in My Garden
Contributed by
limpingunicorn
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 11:50:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sitting in my garden.
A butterfly flutters by, ignores me
but semaphores bye bye.
Sitting in my garden.
An ant arrives, examines my shoes
And antics away
Sitting in my garden.
A bee buzzes over, checks me out
Then bumbles off.
Sitting in my garden.
A wrathful wasp snarls in, wounds me,
zzzzts off to new wars.
Sitting in my garden.
The sullen space that you once filled creeps close -
and stays.
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limpingunicorn
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2003-01-28 23:50:00]
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 11:54:37 PM AEST
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| Very interesting theory! I liked this write! Good one,Christina |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 07:15:39 PM AEST
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something different
interessting concepts
good write
peace be yuor journey
terry |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:18:01 PM AEST
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VERY INTERESTING POEM, I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE FROM YOU.
JEFF |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 08:31:58 AM AEST
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| excellent:) |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 04:03:00 PM AEST
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| a really interesting poem, thought provoking. |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 03:12:06 AM AEST
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J'u know I've come back to this poem two or three times because I like it but have never been able to put into words why.
Still can't |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by limpingunicorn on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:08:37 AM AEST
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HI,
I, on the other hand, know exactly why I like YOUR pithy, humorous and sometimes touching poems.
Thanks for taking the trouble to say something positive. |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:51:53 AM AEST
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Interesting write here......
Jenni |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 02:39:12 AM AEST
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Perhaps you've hit the button with your description of my poems. We are both in our own way alike. By that I mean different to much of the "main stream YPDC"
you know....
lost love........loneliness......suicidal.........heart and soul fanatics...........
I oftern wonder what these characters are going be like whern they've been together for a few years dealing with reality
Thanks for your kind words about my poetry. |
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Re: Sitting in My Garden
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:57:04 AM AEST
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Interesting? I fail to comprehend those words. The poem is beautiful. The silver-sweet chill of love, tinged with a mild tongue of bouyant irony. I love it.
Whoever you are, I admire your work.
"To be a writer is to spend an hour seeking one word, but making one word more meaning than all the world."
~Are you a writer?
The Palatine Poet. |
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