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The Coming Apocalypse
Contributed by
4p0c4lyp53
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Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:18:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the dawn approached
A red filled sky
All hope was encroached
As everyone died
Doomsaday ensued
Macabre panic spread
Faith not renewed
Soon all would be dead
A red sky steals the breath
The horizon's foul eclipse
Then in sauntered death
The dawn of apocalypse
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2006-02-24 02:18:40]
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Re: The Coming Apocalypse
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by eggflipper on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:50:17 PM AEST
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| It's funny how natures' vibrant colours can lead to dark. Beautiful rhyming sceme. |
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Re: The Coming Apocalypse
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 09:32:26 AM AEST
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| well written and keep it up |
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