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Final Fatal Force
Contributed by
R0b
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Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 10:52:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The greatest feeling in the world.
Hearing her voice.
Seeing her smile.
I felt these feelings inside.
Feelings I never knew.
“How can life get better?”
I asked myself.
Then I answered, “It Can’t.”
Then from the great.
An unfamiliar shadow walked in.
Never before seen.
But it changed things, definitely.
After the shock of the Joining.
What felt worse?
Knowing I lost…
-Or-
Knowing I could’ve won.
A relationship gone so good.
Gone so wrong.
In the blink of an eye.
My world.
Turned and burned.
Didn’t think I could ever face the day again.
A fatal blow.
That brought me to my knees.
Felt the darkness encompass me.
Raping me in a cocoon of hatred and pain.
For this was my life now.
Unable to break my shell.
Until. A shining light fell upon my darkened world.
An angel who picked me up from the ashes.
And put me back on my feet.
Where I rose above the pain, above the hate.
For today I am a stronger person.
R0b
Christina I love you so much, thank you for everything, you are my everything. [One15ZeroSix}
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R0b
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Re: Final Fatal Force
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by funnyface on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:09:26 AM AEST
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ALWAYS NICE TO READ GOOD THINGS . WE ARE LIVING IN A WORLD TODAY WHERE THE BAD OVERCOMES THE GOOD. HOPE YOUR RELATIONSHIP WITH CHRISTINA GOES EXTREAMLY WELL. ASK GOD FOR HELP AND HE WILL GIVE IT, HIS HELP IS SO GREAT.....
BEST OF LUCK TO BOTH OF YOU
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Re: Final Fatal Force
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:16:48 PM AEST
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I have tears in my eyes right now and i am not lying about that. I love you so much. I'll never really know what you went through and how much pain that you had endured because i am not you and i will never know.. Just like you will never know exactly how i felt when all that happened with joe. I was going to throw my life away. I mean yeah i cut and it would have been so easy to just let go of everything.. to be able to let go of the pain but i began to realize that i had some little little purpose in this life and i stayed and the pain was actually what had kept me going..
I know that she hurt you and that it left you with so many different emotions that killed and ate away at you.. I am always gonna be here for you no matter what. Through thick and thin for better for worse.. I will always love you for as long as i live..
I love you
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Re: Final Fatal Force
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:33:53 AM AEST
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I have to comment on this AGAIN. I love this poem. It is so sad but yet beautiful.. It makes me tear up everytime I read it.. You should try writing more poems like this..
AND i want to say that I love you.. You have made me a better person, you have opened me up again and cracked my shell that i was drowning in.. Thank you for everything...
I love you with all of my heart..
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