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Alien Nation
Contributed by
Bsteel
on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 10:19:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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The world has been in perpetual warfare,
Since the God's landed here,
Since heaven was promised,
yet all had fallen,
Memories of a homeland forgotten,
Waitring, Waiting, on judgment,
Not from monkey's Darwin,
Conjured from out darkness,
Infinite souls in a perpetual power struggle,
everyone's tricked, minds twist,
Everyone thinks the Greeks invented this,
called logic, thus western civilizatrion is it,
the natural end all,
but for these aliens life goes on,
some call this the work of the devil,
but when your on top of the world,
It's natural to feel a little alienated,
within an alien nation,
yet do not fret and remember we all come from heaven,
all forgetting our original social contract,
blinded by sensual contact,
so blinded by the light, the physical,
and different skin pigmentations, and different perspectives.
that we ignore our true spirtual essence,
waiting, waiting, for signs, to unify,
this alien nation.
Copyright ©
Bsteel
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2006-02-23 22:19:50]
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Re: Alien Nation
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by funnyface on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:12:30 PM AEST
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THE BEST SIGN YOU WILL EVER GET IS IN THE BOOK OF REVELATION. WE ARE LIVING IN A WORLD TODAY THAT IS LOOKING FOR SIGNS
WHEN THEY SHOULD BE LOOKING FOR CHRIST.
I'M SURE THAT WHEN RAPTURE TAKES PLACE
EVERYBODY LEFT BEHIND WILL BLAME IT ON THE ALIENS. THAT HAS ALREADY BEEN PROPHESIED. I GUESS WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS JUST BE READY WHEN HE COMES AND YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY. |
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Re: Alien Nation
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:33:57 AM AEST
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Very creative, strong write.
good work. U r very artisitic .
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Alien Nation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:25:19 AM AEST
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WOW!
Enormously powerful. I feel if you had put a little more patience in this, it would have been something of a masterpiece. Even without that patience it captivates a passionate flare, with wisdom well beyond that which the average person uses everyday. A very firey pattern and flow which errupts with each driven word.
I loved it!
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Re: Alien Nation
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 05:53:08 PM AEST
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strong write
NS |
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