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Lets make a promise.
Contributed by
Damien
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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It's like all these years I"ve had a plague,
the details of which are very vague.
someone would come and be my friend,
and then suddenly into unknown depths descend,
I've always wondered what it was with me,
and after all this while its still a mystery.
I hope things are different with you,
cause friends with your outlook are very few.
I like the way you tell your tales,
there's never a moment that's ever pale,
I love reading all your wonderful odes,
feels like I'm travelling through Wonderland on a skateboard.
Let's make a promise to always be friends,
and I'll find a way for this plague to end.
Copyright ©
Damien
... [
2003-01-28 23:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lets make a promise.
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 04:33:37 AM AEST (User
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Very good one. Thank Q for writing such a lovely poem for me. I liked it lots. V will be good friends always. Iam sure u will find a way to end this plague and make more good friends and maintain them too.
I think this is becoming lecture instead of a comment :) so i'll stop it right here. BY IVY |
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Re: Lets make a promise.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:18:12 PM AEST (User
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a friend will see you through after others see you are through..... great write here............ |
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