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Fade To Black
Contributed by
Renoir
on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 09:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sitting motionless
frozen in time
Distancing myself
from the situation
Far away expression
within empty eyes
numbness creeps in
and takes hold
Emotions gone blank
time corrupted
by the nothingness
Infinity is a void
trapped inside itself
The mind flickers once
and fades to black.
Copyright ©
Renoir
... [
2006-02-23 21:00:29]
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Re: Fade To Black
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 10:02:09 PM AEST
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| nicely written... i hope your able to find your way through it all A+++ |
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Re: Fade To Black
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:50:12 PM AEST
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| a great description of our final moment |
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Re: Fade To Black
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:40:16 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write about such a horrible feeling. Been there before. Take care. I wish you peace, Laura |
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