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Heavan
Contributed by
Tex
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Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 03:45:14 PM in AEST
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why do people pray to go to heavan
instead of praying to stay on earth
when earth is where loved ones live
while heavan is only where loved ones pray
On this earth you can make yourself rise
You can travel as high as your dreams will take you
In heavan, you begin at your peak
Leaving you with no where to go
Although someday most wish to reach those pearly gate
It is the peak that we thrive for on earth
That will oneday allow us to reach up into heavan
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Re: Heavan
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by Gigi_15 on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 05:16:08 PM AEST
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wow ur so right. i never thought of that before. its true everyone prays to go to heaven and not to stay here. ur so right!!..well written:D.. thank you for this poem:)
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Re: Heavan
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:39:04 AM AEST
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Very wise u r. I can tottaly relate to this.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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