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Betrayal
Contributed by
freespirit
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Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 10:32:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Betrayal
Dreams now shattered pain is with in
Years of anger mistrust and betrayal
Tormented and beaten forgotten denied
Drugs and additions so many lies
The pain I knew I had to endure
To keep my self living I knew this for sure
The violence the rage ill take to my grave
To save my child I now must be brave
With the birth of a child life should begins
This love so precious that lies deep with in
Gave me the courage the strength and the will
To keep my child safe from this demons from hell
Written By
Dorothy Calvert
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Re: Betrayal
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by funnyface on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 01:31:18 AM AEST
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FREESPIRIT, THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE GREAT COMMENT SO MANY PEOPLE TODAY ARE TURNING TO THE WORLD FOR ANSWERS WHEN GOD IS THE ANSWER TO EVERY PROBLEM. I JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE READ SOME OF YOUR POETRY AND FIND IT VERY TOUCHING. IN THIS PARTICULAR
POEM I'M TROUBLED TO THINK THAT THIS MIGHT BE ABOUT YOU IF SO I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT YOU HAVE A FRIEND TO TALK TO AND SOMEONE THAT WILL PRAY FOR YOU
JUST LET ME KNOW EITHER WAY I WILL PRAY FOR YOU. GOD BLESS AND KEEP YOU ALWAYS
IN HIS CARE. FROM: A FRIEND IN CHRIST, AKA FUNNYFACE |
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Re: Betrayal
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by oldschool on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:30:16 AM AEST
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Dorothy,
Very powerful message and one I can relate to. Unfortunately our children are often prone to make the same mistakes we did as we are prone to repeat the mistakes of our parents. I do agree with you that the key to our liberation lies as a spiritual level...
God Bless OS |
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