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Riding into the night...
Contributed by
zealousnatalie
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Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 10:06:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Sleeping in a bed of flowers. I feel his love deep in my bones.
Strong, he carries my whole world. He carries it on his shoulders.
I smell my scent on his breath...We ride deep into the night.
Peaking like a rising sun, penetrating the sky.
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2006-02-23 10:06:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Riding into the night...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 08:51:01 PM AEST (User
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~*Now this is awesome...*~
Interesting and provocative! Elijah had so much of this redeeming, resurrection, life- that long after he was buried his bones were filled with transforming electrical energy of life.
I love the line:
"We ride deep into the night.
Peaking like a rising sun, penetrating the sky."
A masterful masterpiece.
~Lilly-Quill |
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