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I honestly don't feel so bad

Contributed by Onslaught on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 04:59:19 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Emotions, chemicals,
floating,
don't worry;
it will all soon be over.
And it never even was
Matter and mass,
or is it the energy that thinks,
no it�s neither,
without one or the other,
there is nothing.

I don't even see your faces anymore,
only the emotions, the energy,
negative or positive,
but all ultimately amounting to nothing.
Oh I made you smile,
oh I made you think,
well that�s great, but who cares.
Are we really feeling anything?

Your reality is fading,
grab on to as much of it as you can
before it is gone forever.
Was it as good for you
as it was for me?

I honestly don't feel so bad.

Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2006-02-23 04:59:19]
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Re: I honestly don't feel so bad (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:13:22 PM AEST
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Hey. (I know you showed me this before but I still wanted to comment.) It's a very intelligent thought, the whole poem. And if you have no optimism it's probably very true. I prefer the thought that who cares about the meaning, just to do your best and enjoy what you can because if nothing does matter like you say, then why not make the best of it? And if it does matter you're good too because you will have done your best and had a happy life. You wrote this very well. i love you sweety, what i care about most is us living happily together. Very soon my angel, we'll just make the best of the time we have in between. :)

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