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what you will
Contributed by
twick
on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:04:22 AM in AEST
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I am the dark comedy,
the kind of train wreck you laugh at.
people will question my thoughts
cause they don't quite understand
They read what's written instead
Most is true, and most is a lie
I couldn't tell, I couldn't decide
It sounds good on paper so I go with it
I just hope you buy in
You are my currency
You keep me current
Only I'm not into sunshine and daisies.
If you're in it to escape the pain
stop reading,
now.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-02-23 02:04:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: what you will
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 09:19:17 PM AEST (User
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Keep writing, express those thoughts, just made comment on another poem, I said.. we read not to understand others, but to understand ourselves..
Others see us differently then we see ourselves.. we are mirrors to one another, which means, we see ourselves in others. some may argue and say, if we could see ourselves as others see us, we would run like heck and disappear.
This is an excellent write. again..its not so much to escape pain while reading poetry, but to understand ourselves through what we read...
Hugs, raquelLeah
If we could see ourselves as others see us, we would vanish on the spot.
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