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Ghost in my heart
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:28:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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A haunting comes calling
time from time. It wanders from the soul
To the mind. Hearing the cries,
As it screams for immunities key.
Begging for peace, so it may be release.
Asking nothing more than
To be deceased.
Head lowered
I cannot part. It will always be an aspiration.
A Ghost in my heart.
I plead, please
Forgive me. I will never, be able
To set you free.
The sadness struggles
On Between us. Never Free,
Nothing more and nothing less
Worlds within,
Must learn to co-inside.
Mingling forever, Eternity together
will Be our suicide
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2006-02-23 00:28:48]
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Re: Ghost in my heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 01:44:21 AM AEST
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great rhyme scheme here.
well structured and expressed.
Emotive themes.
"As it screams for immunities keys"
--I like that line, espectally. Very metaphoric.
"Worlds within", "co-inside" -i can relate to that concept, as I can relate to the main intention of this piece.
Saddening but a worthy read.
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Re: Ghost in my heart
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by poet_of_anger on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 04:13:18 AM AEST
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| Very well structured, the rhyme scheme was incredible. simply marvelous work. |
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Re: Ghost in my heart
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:41:26 PM AEST
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Hi there are poets out there and want to be poets you are a real poet great writing
Realy enjoyed the read god bless
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Re: Ghost in my heart
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 06:33:54 PM AEST
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good write..
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