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Power struggle
Contributed by
Bsteel
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Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 09:31:23 PM in AEST
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ambiguous
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pushing past the limit,
to break the schism,
of indecision, I go on instincts,
pushing the boundaries,
for reason is inherant in all that was founded,
the truth is my mechanism,
I'm breaking past my own mental prison,
Refusing to give in,
rather I can not stay living,
till the logic is written,
fermenting in my subconcious,
the keys to the riddle,
that'll knock you unconcious,
with the heart of a boxer,
evryday a new obstacle,
but i prosper and conquer,
acheive the impossible,
that a faith that is not desrcibable,
has perpetuated the undeniable,
A presence inalienable,
Inconceivable, but highly credible,
unbelievable, unforrgettable,
leaving, left no evidence,
thruths that seem self evident,
yet how t forms so eloquent,
when the time is up and all has been said,
lthis be a testament,
you will find the remannts of a man who lived,
By the sheer mercy of everything,
and from that mercy a hope did spring.
To push the limits of empowerment.
Copyright ©
Bsteel
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2006-02-22 21:31:23]
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Re: Power struggle
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 11:55:05 PM AEST
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Very interesting, indeed. I agree with a whole lot of it. Perhaps I don't feel that logic is infallible, for I do rely on intuition as well (call that unconscious logic, perhaps?), but truth certainly is, as you said, capable of "knocking unconscious", and the best basis for one's life. I like the last four lines as well, quite a lot. Well done.
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Re: Power struggle
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by Broken-Suicide on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:50:38 AM AEST
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It uses quite a few words i dont understand only because of low vocab. But excellent right anyways
I liked this "I'm breaking past my own mental prison,
Refusing to give in"
It inspires me to keep living and not to give up.Thank you |
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