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Titles Containing the Word SEX Catch Your Eye
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 07:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He called me beautiful,
I called him out.
He said he loved me,
and I made the observation
that he had probably
said it more than
a few times before.
He picked me flowers.
But, they were weak
and didn't last.
I over analyzed it,
and came to the conclusion
that his real intent was poor.
He had most obviously
meant something more.
He wrote a letter,
and in it confessed
that he was a waste.
and he was a mess.
He told me that
around me he felt
like bettering himself.
For a brief second
I played his game.
But, shortly after, came around,
and immediately shot him down.
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eleventoedsloth
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2006-02-22 19:17:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Titles Containing the Word SEX Catch Your Eye
(User Rating: 1 ) by deepviolet on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 03:22:43 AM AEST (User
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am i crazy or is this poem kinda funny? yes, it's sad the girl is so clueless and paranoid, but still... i don't know. oh, and titles containing the word sex do catch my eye, thanks. |
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