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Striking

Contributed by skc_cutie on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:16:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

How can you see through all these fake smiles
My feelings, I try my best to hide
Yet somehow you know of the long nights I've cried
lord, in everyday I am facing life head-on and know not what else I can do to make things
better. I am just a single soul lost in a world of betrayel what more can I do? lord What more
can i do?
Then along comes all the salty tears
Which come flowing and unsparing as the sea

Yet you can see strait through me
You can completely see right through me
As if I am as transparent as the tears that fall from mine eyes
If only you could know half of the pain that I survive
Then you would see what is going on and why I can't be real
I stand up to these hardships face on
Yet receive nothing but hurt
If i keep taking on all this fire
I am just going to keep getting burnt

lord, in everyday I am facing life head-on and know not what else I can do to make things
better. I am just a single soul lost in a world of betrayel what more can I do? lord What more
can i do?
Then along comes all the salty tears
Which come flowing and unsparing as the sea

I wish that mabe you could see all the hurt that has fallen
alike a heavy boulder fallen upon me
I need help to get back up
For If i have none, i am afraid I have taking so many striving blows
From this boulder of Rock and Snow
I will never be able to get back up

so i ask lord, in everyday I am facing life head-on and know not what else I can do to make things
better. I am just a single soul lost in a world of betrayel what more can I do? lord What more
can i do?

Copyright © skc_cutie ... [ 2006-02-22 12:16:13]
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Re: Striking (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:12:55 PM AEST
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ouch...there is sooo much personal turmoil in your words here. I think all of us feel this way at one time or another...I know I do.

Powerful, expressive write my dear
Very well done
Roses
UL

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