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WHO HAS THE ANSWER
Contributed by
Scouse
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Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
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The world has gone from bad to worse
Who will find the cure
There's got to be an end to this curse
Before God shuts the door
Although the sun is still in the sky
When the moon has gone to bed
There are children thinking they can fly
Just before they are dead
A fantasy world takes them anywhere
With Giraffes and elephants to
They do things that we wouldn't dare
no, never me and you
They are in need of psychology
instead of being a mug
I blame it all on technology
Not all upon the drug
If we hadn't taken things so far
Not pushed the human mind
We wouldn't have these dreadful scars
Like children going blind
The final crunch I think you will find
Is a bitter pill to swallow
A new born baby, addiction in mind
What next? What comes tomorrow.
Copyright ©
Scouse
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2003-01-28 21:40:00]
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Re: WHO HAS THE ANSWER
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by withlove_me on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 12:40:48 PM AEST
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| So well writen,,,where does the answer lie(lie)Great read,,,Buren |
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Re: WHO HAS THE ANSWER
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by Scouse on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 04:22:06 AM AEST
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Wouldn't it be nice if the world and the people in it, didn't ned these things in their lives.
Enid |
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Re: WHO HAS THE ANSWER
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by tiffy on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:14:37 PM AEST
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| i agree the world has gone to hell and it doesn't look like its gonna return any time soon. keep up the good work!!! |
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Re: WHO HAS THE ANSWER
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 08:43:45 PM AEST
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Excellent poem....
honey56 |
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Re: WHO HAS THE ANSWER
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by secretwind on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 10:39:50 PM AEST
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| yes this is a excellent poem |
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