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Love is Forever
Contributed by
curtisc
on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 11:32:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you love someone it is forever,
even if you are no longer with them.
The mark they made will always be there,
eternally lingering deep, down inside.
Years upon years may pass,
but still that one is with you.
There is absolutely no way to escape it,
love is simply forever.
If you find that one you love,
be sure to hold on to them tight.
There's nothing worse than losing love,
because it is forever.
Random things will trigger your mind,
and the one you love is there.
Bringing with memories both good and bad,
but before long they are gone once more.
Still, love never goes away,
that one will always be there.
It follows you in your shadow,
forever...
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curtisc
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2006-02-21 23:32:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love is Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 11:42:50 PM AEST (User
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Very good write and so true.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love is Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:41:59 AM AEST (User
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Nicely done.
Though I would disagree that there is something worse than losing love and that is taking it for granted. It's like depriving the root its nourishment.
You did paint a lovely picture |
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Re: Love is Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:41:08 AM AEST (User
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Hmm Curtis, I don't know wat to say...I'm not too crazy bout this one, well at least the flow...u kno i'm partial to ones that rhyme. However, I can agree with parts of what ur saying...TD |
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Re: Love is Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:50:05 PM AEST (User
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absolutely bittersweet and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa
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