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MY FINAL DAYS
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 11:06:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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AS I TAKE THE RAZOR BLADE OUT OF MY POCKET
HOPING TO BLEED TO DEATH
THE VOICES IN MY HEAD SAY DO IT QUICK
SO I TAKE A DEEP BREATH
AS I SLOWLY CUT MY WRIST
AND BLOOD STARTS TO MAKE A SLOW STREAM
MY MOUTH OPENS WIDE
AND MY VOICE STARTS TO SCREAM
I'VE DONE IT I START TO YELL
BUT I'M CATHOLIC SUICIDE MEANS A ONE WAY
TICKET TO HELL
I REMEBER MY FAMILY AS I PASS OUT
AND HIT THE FLOOR
MY BODY LIES LIFELESS
AS SOMEONE OPENS THE DOOR
SOMEONE IS TRYING TO SAVE MY LIFE
IN MY MIND I'M YELLING PLEASE DON'T
THE BLOOD CAN BE TAKEN A AWAY
BUT THE PAIN I LIVE WITH IN MY LIFE WON'T
AS I TAKE MY FINAL BREATH, AND DREFT TO MY DEATH
MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY GO TO THEIR KNEES AND PRAY
TO HAVE ME BACK BECAUSE THEY SAY I WAS THE BEST
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2006-02-21 23:06:41]
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Re: MY FINAL DAYS
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by ShadowFox on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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| This is a very strong written poem. I know the feeling of being close to someone that you almost lost. |
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Re: MY FINAL DAYS
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 01:31:38 AM AEST
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| very sad poem and it was so good. |
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Re: MY FINAL DAYS
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by lilblkcat on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 01:43:23 PM AEST
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| wow.. that poem really touches the heart. thank you so much for posting it. |
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Re: MY FINAL DAYS
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:34:34 PM AEST
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| deep words you write i cant believe that someone ha sthe same feelings as i once did is kool yet bad.im glad youcould write out these thoughts. nice job |
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