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Wish Upon A Star
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 07:43:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ah, Sweet,
for that is what you are;
sweet
and tempting
(wish upon a star)
Ah, Dear,
for that is what you are;
dear
and precious
(Look! A shooting star!)
Ah, Faith,
for that is what you are;
faith
and trust
(See that shining star?)
Ah, Hope,
for that is what you are;
hope
and dreams
(Wish upon a star.)
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Re: Wish Upon A Star
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 08:03:53 PM AEST
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Nice, it's simple and sweet with playful rhyme
Ah, Hope,
for that is what you are;
hope
and dreams
(Wish upon a star.)
Very nice... keep it up! |
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Re: Wish Upon A Star
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by ShadowFox on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 08:08:36 PM AEST
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| Nice write. I like it. |
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Re: Wish Upon A Star
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by potpiegrrl on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 10:03:12 PM AEST
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very nice
kind of rolls off the tongue. |
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Re: Wish Upon A Star
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 06:29:41 PM AEST
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i espescially love your style and form here:)
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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