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Milo
Contributed by
R0b
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Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A glance into the future.
Leaves you blind.
A glance into the past.
Leaves you wondering.
You look up to the wavering light.
But youre left with infinite darkness.
All feeling is lost.
Your body goes numb.
Unable to move.
You know how it feels.
A sickening feeling.
That chills your insides.
And burns your flesh.
It eats your thoughts.
And erases your memory.
What can you do?
You feel so helpless.
As you fall to your knees.
You try to scream.
All that is heard is silence.
You shut your eyes.
Thinking, this is only a dream.
You open them to endless pain.
What’s your next move?
2~20~06
R0b
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R0b
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Re: Milo
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by VivreAmoureuxMourir on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 05:16:06 PM AEST
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Amazing.
I love your choice of words,
It really makes it a great poem.
And sucks you in.
I love it. |
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Re: Milo
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:05:12 PM AEST
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Hi.. I like this poem it is really good. like i said before i think that your poems are full of thought and questions but it is really cool the way that you set them up and when the reader reads them it pulls them in and it is a way for them to hear your opinions and what you think and believe.. I like this poem it is really good and i like your word choice..
love you
christina |
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