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You Die for Me. I Die for You.

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:25:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

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So die for me. Would you die for me? Those cuts on your arm say that you will. Those cuts identical to mine. Speaking in shatters…pieces on the floor, like glass and blood. I like how you bleed so sincerely for me.
And everything is so right and yet so wrong. Everything is upside-down. Like my world has been flipped over and everything is falling out. Those rotting skeletons in my closet are nothing more than dust-bunnies now.
You bleed so sincerely, like the pain isn’t there. Cutting cuticles with razor-blades and marking yourself forever. All those scars are so meaningless, but yet make you who you are. You bleed like your blood is nothing….
So I’ll die for you. I’ll bleed sincerely; you seem so troubled by my calmness when my arm is gashed. You seem so scared that you made those marks on my arm….like I’ll turn around and hate you.
But I bleed for you. I’m yours forever.
So we’ll die for each other. ***** heaven and hell, we’ll make our own world.

Copyright Â© MG_Akela22090 ... [ 2006-02-21 17:25:06]
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Re: You Die for Me. I Die for You. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 09:56:27 PM AEST
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this is very interesting I liked the flow.. I love that first little paragraph.. very interesting but i enjoyed this piece thanks for sharing

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Re: You Die for Me. I Die for You. (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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an interesting write.
i like it

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